tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9019799454019372996.post2278670102664089705..comments2010-04-16T08:03:11.868-07:00Comments on Elizabeth's Exciting Blog: Short StoryElizabethhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15750928249167645954noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9019799454019372996.post-61022012036742878792010-01-27T17:56:43.600-08:002010-01-27T17:56:43.600-08:001. The conflict of the story was that Amy is kidna...1. The conflict of the story was that Amy is kidnapped by the greatest drug lord in columbia. It is resolved by the druglord getting a really bad sinus headache. The story was extremely dramatic and i don't think that there is anything that could make it more dramatic<br />2. The protagonist does change over time because she wants to avenge her fallen family. The story would be pointless if this element was not incorporated.<br />3. My favorite part of the story was when Amy escapes the warehouse and injures everyone in the warehouse and kills Rico.<br />4. The tale's best quality is the description of the conflict. "Once she hears Rico just close enough for her to aim and shoot him in the head, she comes out from behind the crates and yells “THIS IS FOR MY FAMILY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” She aims well and shoots Rico right in the center of eyes, the kill shot."<br />5. The story's theme is that revenge is sweet, this ties into the story because Amy is contempt now that Rico is dead and the rest are injured.<br />6. The main thing that the author needs to revise is that there needs to be some more description through dialogue near the end of the story. Good Job Beth! :DJonathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00305701023712445000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9019799454019372996.post-47860193808805410822010-01-26T18:53:00.219-08:002010-01-26T18:53:00.219-08:00Vocabulary used:
-Trepidation
-Aloof
-Doleful
-Mor...Vocabulary used:<br />-Trepidation<br />-Aloof<br />-Doleful<br />-Morose<br />-Garbled<br />-Myriad<br />-Ethereal<br />-Girth<br />-Prodigious<br />-Furtive<br />-Dilatory<br />-Bequeathed<br />-Malefactor<br />-Imbue<br />-FastidiousElizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15750928249167645954noreply@blogger.com